O Mestre dos Desejos
Muitas pessoas passam a vida tentando consertar seus erros do passado. Lembram-se de como tudo era melhor antes e lamentam-se imensamente por não ser mais daquela maneira. Deleitam-se com suas pequenas vinganças e os raros segundos de glória. Haylla Hellarien não.
Ela não tem passado. Seu presente é desanimador. Seu futuro é incerto. Sem memória e com o apoio dos pais e da irmã ela busca as respostas para as mais enigmáticas perguntas. Entristecida, ela sai do interior da Inglaterra à caminho de Londres para cursar Jornalismo. Nesse momento, um homem misterioso invade sua vida, seus pensamentos e seu coração.
Quem é esse homem? O que se esconde no passado de Haylla?
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Ressalva: Nada relacionado à Harry Potter me pertence. Se fosse assim, Snape cairia dentro de um caldeirão quando criança e morreria carbonizado.
Comentários (678)
Nhaaaaaaaaaa! Eu li o cap 8. Kara, eu não imaginava que vc fosse colocar tanta gente pra reconhecer a Mione! auhauhauhahu Ficou perfeito. Amei o resumo(sua versão) para o final da guérra, e para a morte de voldemort. Mas estou muito curiosa para saber quem foi aquele vulto incapusado que obliviou a Mione e levou-a para o hospital. Afinal, o tiu voldie não iria deixar barato para ela. Acho que esse "vulto incapusado" deveria mata-la não? Bom. Ainda não sei se vc deu explicação para isso. Mas gostaria que vc à desse. Fiquei realmente curiosa! Nhaaaaaaa! E adorei o Sectunsempra que o Harry mandou em um comensal!(Sim, vc pode esperniar, mas sou fã do Snape! Eu o amo! *cara de apaixonada idiota* auhauhauh) Bjokas linda! Tou indo ler o nove! Nhaaaa! E plz! já passou da tua meta de posts! (os 550) então posta o 10 vai?!
2007-05-24Acabei de ler o cap 7. "Como Uma Fênix" e.... CARACAAAAAAAA! auhauhauhauha Finalmente aquela velha chata fez algo de bommmm! Quando o cap terminou com o Ron falando:Hermione? Eu quase tive um colapso! auhauhauh XD~~~ Ainda bem que eu esperei vc postar bastante caps! Acho que eu não iria aguentar a demora pelo cap 8! ehehehe Mas agora chega de ladainha! Vou lá ler o oito e jah volto pra comentar! Tou louca pra saber a reação da Haylla! eheheheeh
2007-05-24Ok. Estou à muito tempo sem passar por aqui. Particularmente, eu não gosto de ler por cap... Eu gosto de ter bastante coisa para ler de uma vez... Mas também acho injusto esperar uma montanha de caps e depois postar só um comentário, ou nenhum... Emtão, eu vou colocar uma review para cada cap que eu ler. Bom, o primeiro é o 6. "No Fogo da Lareira". Achei muito dramático. Adorei a cena de ciume chiliquenta da Haylla(é assim que se escreve o nome deda?oO) Achei até que alguma magia iria se manifestar devido à toda aquela alteração, mas me enganei... ehehehehe. Nha... Fiquei preocupada quando um vidro fincou no pulso dela... Achei que ela iria sangrar até ter qu ir para o hospital! oO mas o bixinha forte! auhauhauhauha Bom. Amei o cap. Muito bem escrito. Perfeito. E como eu disse à muito tempo atraz, tua fic não perdeu à capacidade de prender os leitores depois da revelação do shipper! Parabéns! nha...^^' Agora vou lá ler o outro e já volto para fazer outro coment!
2007-05-24Como vc pode ver, quantidade não significa qualidade. ¬¬
2007-05-24554... 10 \o/
2007-05-23finalmente att a minha fic... passa lah ok?att a sua tbmmm...plexxxxxxx...huahuahuahuhahuhua...bjus...Dianna Black!
2007-05-23axo q devemos desculpas umas ás outras, neh??? quando as duas estivermos livres na talvez surreal férias, faremos isso certo?? :**** espero a fic, viu?? estou ocupada , mas nem tanto...
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